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emptied out.
a half empty glass in vague rivers of doubt
sun shining down in the insipid southwest
words whispered had left me in a trance
woke up spiraling + perfecting a lonesome dance
i'm bringing it on tour.
it's not headed east.
(at least that's what I'll say.)

sleeping aides take control of the day.
TV at 4 AM  because theres no point in saying...
ambivalence so frivolous brought me here
lead on so long
i'm wrong + you're gone
standing on this fencepost
waiting on your turn
will you pull and embrace me
or shove me so I learn
that perhaps my only romance
will lie in song as it burns

flickering + weak
overwrought on the spot
insalubrious notions
piercing through me as we part
soaring through the shadows
comfortless clouds have brought
and once again I'm followed
by a sick and damaged heart.
©2007-2009 ~freezey
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Author's Comments

4/4 of this series of poems about the same person.

Heartsickness #2. Gigantic holes of lonesome dire. Nothing excites. Playing back the most bittersweet moments en masse. Wondering what might've happened if it started sooner. Utter frustration at yet another failed attempt at bliss. To cut your heart out of your chest and hold it for them to inspect. A fleeting plead from final ticking moments. A resignation that after failing so many times, the only place the heart can stop hurting is when it confides in the imaginary. The realization that imaginary venine only makes it hurt that much more.

"blood crushed from a clock
I'm in love but we just talk
and your teeth make me weak
and you're keeping them from me"
-"You're The One I Want", by Jets to Brazil

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this sounds so wonderfully blake-ish, whilst still maintaining its unique-ness...

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"i heard that he was kind of a... fuckbastard."- jesse <3

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